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Personal Statement Review for
Pre-Dental Students

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Get Expert Feedback on Your Dental School Personal Statement

Struggling with what to say or how to say it? Submit your draft and receive personalized, actionable feedback from someone who knows what dental schools are really looking for.

Why Do I Need to Have My Personal Statement Reviewed?

Your personal statement is your "pre-interview"

It is your chance to give a glimpse of who you are as a person, rather than just stats on an application

Dental schools receive thousands of applications. Your personal statement is your chance to stand out—not with buzzwords, but with authenticity, clarity, and purpose.

Better personal statement = more interviews​

More interviews = more acceptances

What’s Included in the Review

Each review includes:

  • ✅ 2 Reviews of your Personal Statement

  • ✅ 2, 30-minute Zoom sessions to discuss our suggestions

  • ✅ In-depth feedback on structure, clarity, and storytelling

  • ✅ Suggestions to strengthen your message and voice

  • ✅ Comments on grammar, tone, and flow

Who Will Review Your Essay?

What Students are Saying

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Hayden, Binghamton University

"Shreya helped me improve the wording and flow of my personal statement with thoughtful, specific suggestions. She explained the purpose behind each change so clearly—I feel much more confident and informed thanks to her!"
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Katelyn, University of Dayton

"I really appreciated the individual comments and the willingness to talk through the entire process. They were incredibly helpful, offered great insights, and made the whole experience feel supportive and personalized."
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Zaky, University of

Detroit Mercy

"I really enjoyed how efficient the whole process was, and the feedback was very, very, very helpful! Plus, Sofia was so sweet and genuinely helped me improve my personal statement immensely."

Pricing

Comprehensive Personal Statement Review Package  – 150
 

What’s included:

  • 📝 Two full reviews of your personal statement

    • Detailed, personalized comments on content, clarity, and flow

    • Suggestions for structure, storytelling, and admissions impact

    • Document with suggestions to reference when making edits

  • 💬 Two 30-minute Zoom sessions

    • One after your first draft review to discuss key improvements

    • One after your revision to fine-tune your final draft and address any questions
       

This is a complete feedback + coaching experience designed to help you confidently submit your strongest personal statement to dental schools.

How it Works

Ready to perfect your Personal Statement?

 

Click below to set up a free 5-minute consultation about how we can help

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